2008年1月12日 星期六
Operate With Caution
Modern technology today has made our life easier. For example, computer is very entertaining, and people become attached in it. We can receive mails, order goods, make an appointment, and even communicate with other people online. It’s so convenient that we can do a lot of things without going out and wasting much time. We can’t live now without computers. However, it also brings us many problems. For instances, the Internet has made shopping easy, but it is possible to steal online credit information. We also have to worry about viruses that could damage our computers. There are too many examples to take, and the only one thing we can do is operating with caution.
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Hi again. I see 14 posts for the 3rd period (Dec. 17-January 13). That is plenty. Good. Too bad your final blog grade will be half of this time's grade, though. Make sure you keep up next semester.
I'll be back soon after reading your posts.
Chris
Hello for the last time this semester. I'm giving a nice 79 for this third period, giving you an averaged grade of 40 for the blog grade this semester. You need to spellcheck and grammar check every time you post or give me homework next semester; clearly you have not done so in your blog entries, though it was required! You need to be more careful with countable nouns, such as "computer" in sentence 2 here: that is countable, so it needs "the" or "a" or something like that before "computer." Your subject seems to waver, as when you say "we can't live now without A COMPUTER" (seeming to mean one specific computer), but then you say "it also brings us many problems," which suggests that this one computer has brought all the computer users in the world these problems. Finally, "the only thing we can do is to operate with caution." I would agree as regards English writing. Use more caution and make sure you are writing rightly.
Happy New Year
Chris O'Brien
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