2007年12月20日 星期四
Friend
“The friend you need is a friend indeed.” Everyone has friends, but it does not mean has good friends. Good friends must share responsibility for my sadness and happiness. They keep me company whenever I need them. We give support to each other just like a family. They are also my teachers; they will point out the mistakes for correction when I make a mistake. We are true friends and have very good friendships. Therefore, having a good friendship is such important a thing that I will value all my true friends.
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I will rewrite this somewhat to fix some problems; please analyze the differences so you know the type of problems you're making, and try to avoid them next time.
"A friend in need is a friend, indeed." Everyone has friends, but that does not mean that everyone has good friends. Good friends must share in the responsibility to relieve each other's sadness and maintain each other's happiness. My friends keep me company whenever I need them. We give each other support, just like the members of a family. They are also my teachers; they point out my mistakes for correction every time. We are true friends. Therefore, having good friendships is such an important thing that I will always value all my true friends.
Chris O'Brien
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